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What the Cluck? by DanielSplatter What the Cluck? by DanielSplatter
Time for silly, stupid comics! :D

Spent most of the weekend working on this, and having Labor Day on my side made it easier to make. :)

Trying a new style for Rarity's mane. :nod: Something hopefully closer to what the comics do. :iconrarityishappyplz:

I'm afraid I don't have a lot more to say about this one, rofl. Just some "Something innocent coming off as shocking" humor. :D I hope it gets a laugh out of everyone! I have a few chores to finish up around the house, so I'll see you all later tonight. B-)

Art by :icondanielsplatter:
Time Spent: About 14 hours
MLP bleongs to Hasbro.
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Okay, my first critique. Here goes.
I liked this strip a lot. Even though we're all familiar with these sorts of misunderstandings, I've never seen this exact situation done before, and I did find it really funny. The combination of your drawings and the script captured Pinkie's and Rarity's personalities well for this type of situation.
Your art style is fantastic; the only things I noticed were the odd shading of Rarity's mane (the underside is a lighter, warmer shade of purple) and that the last panel looks just a tad bit rushed (Rarity and Pinkie are kinda misshapen). However, none of these were particularly glaring or even detrimental to the quality of your work.
I particularly liked the second panel - You did a great job on Rarity's eyelashes and makeup, and her pose, nose, and mouth are just adorable. Also, the folding of the ears and slight difference in position and size of her eyes gives her a wonderfully shocked expression.
You've gained another watcher. I'm really looking forward to more activity from you.
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Wrong, and yet so right!
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AnlenaRarity Mar 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:iconraritywtfplz:PINKIE CONFUSED ME BY THE LANGUAGE OF THE AMERICAN !!! 
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jeremeymcdude Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lols! thats all i can say :icondashlolplz:
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AnlenaRarity Apr 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yeah me too :icondashlolplz:
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:iconmarlieset:
......... Oh. :oops: 
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:iconderpywhooves109w:
Blush Blush Blush Blush emoticon Blush Blush Blush Blush Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1] Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1] 
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:icondbzfan12:
I keep forgetting that "cock" is another word for "chicken" in the same way I keep forgetting that "tit" is another word for "chickadee"
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RedApropos Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Would you like a yes?
Here's a yes.

Here, have ALL my yes!
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DanielSplatter Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes I would like a yes! I shall take your yes and raise it by 100! What say you to that? Yes!? :excited:
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RedApropos Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YES!
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