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What the Cluck? by DanielSplatter What the Cluck? by DanielSplatter
Time for silly, stupid comics! :D

Spent most of the weekend working on this, and having Labor Day on my side made it easier to make. :)

Trying a new style for Rarity's mane. :nod: Something hopefully closer to what the comics do. :iconrarityishappyplz:

I'm afraid I don't have a lot more to say about this one, rofl. Just some "Something innocent coming off as shocking" humor. :D I hope it gets a laugh out of everyone! I have a few chores to finish up around the house, so I'll see you all later tonight. B-)

Art by :icondanielsplatter:
Time Spent: About 14 hours
MLP bleongs to Hasbro.
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Okay, my first critique. Here goes.
I liked this strip a lot. Even though we're all familiar with these sorts of misunderstandings, I've never seen this exact situation done before, and I did find it really funny. The combination of your drawings and the script captured Pinkie's and Rarity's personalities well for this type of situation.
Your art style is fantastic; the only things I noticed were the odd shading of Rarity's mane (the underside is a lighter, warmer shade of purple) and that the last panel looks just a tad bit rushed (Rarity and Pinkie are kinda misshapen). However, none of these were particularly glaring or even detrimental to the quality of your work.
I particularly liked the second panel - You did a great job on Rarity's eyelashes and makeup, and her pose, nose, and mouth are just adorable. Also, the folding of the ears and slight difference in position and size of her eyes gives her a wonderfully shocked expression.
You've gained another watcher. I'm really looking forward to more activity from you.
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Silverleaf888 Featured By Owner 6 days ago   General Artist
I laughed at the first panel. 
What's up with names of birds like this? The blue-footed booby, blue tit, and, of course, the nickname for "chicken" above? And even in Pokemon, the Pokemon Fletchling has the ability "Big Pecks" xD
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wolfpup33 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Student Artist
You orgot one! The Booby!
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Silverleaf888 Featured By Owner 4 days ago   General Artist
Didn't I already mention it...?
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wolfpup33 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Student Artist
idk.
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Silverleaf888 Featured By Owner 4 days ago   General Artist
Lol.
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DarkusRelling Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Th-this... d-dan ouda dan. DAN OUDA DAN. :|
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bananaguy12 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
fuck you lol
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HaruAxeman Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Im pretty sure Pinkie knew how that sounded and decided to screw with Rarity  about it :)
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AgentDan1337 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
LOLROFL
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shakstineuniverse10 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
ermm
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